11 months ago
Sunday, February 24, 2008
Rewrites
I had an idea for Moonlight Cafe that I thought might make it even better, so rewrote a few chapters to try it out.  I loved it, so am in the process of rewriting the entire novel.  I'm about 1/3 of the way done.  This rewrite is easier than the initial go through.  If I work hard, I should be done in about 2 weeks.  What am I changing?  I originally wrote it in third person, mainly from Brenda's point of view, but with snippets from Vincent's point of view as well.  I decided to try it in first person.  It works a lot better, especially considering that I am going to write another book telling Vincent's story.  I promise, it won't be redundant.  It will show what Vincent did before and after he met Brenda, in the time between, and with a totally different view on their time together.  But first I'm going to finish this rewrite.  Everyone who has heard the change so far likes it a lot better, including myself.  So querying agents has been put on hold until I am finished with the change.
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